Awesome...
The song itself is great, you nailed your goal.
My only two complaints are (and you lose one point for each, not in a harsh way though)
First-The stick in the beginning sounds wrong, consider using a hat (if your using fl studio (and it sounds like you are) there are some good hi hats under legacy-FCP-Hi hats) if you want the stick there are better ones.
Second-Is not long enough, please finish it!